My Poetry, Philosophy, Thoughts and Ideas.

6/18/2005

Shining clouds

pride not humility
are like passing clouds
virtues not vice
is what is to be proud
charity not possesion
when rains from these clouds
love not hate
in our hearts is ploughed
smile not frown
like the sun had vowed
win not lose
in this game unbowed

2 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

nice poem

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Anonymous Anonymous said...

NEW AGE CLOUDY DREAMY HIPPIE DIPPIE FLUFFY PUFFY? BADLY WRITTEN TENTH RATE POETRY? IN FACT THIS ISNT POETRY ITS JUST CLOUDY DREAMY HIPPIE DIPPIEFLUFFY STUFF FULL OF LOVEY DOVEY OH SO YUMMY ZEN I CHING BLAH BLAH BLAH BLOODY AWFUL

5:55 PM

 

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